A cry of loneliness...I looked up to the sky at nights...
Sunday...
Monday...
Tuesday...
Wednesday...
All I saw were only dark clouds,
No stars, no moon... so dark...
So was my heart
"Oh God, I feel so lonely"
Thursday...
Friday...
The rain was pouring from the sky
Running down through my face,
along with my tears...
"Oh God, this pain!!!"
Saturday...
I looked up to the sky again,
No more clouds... so clear
I smiled... no more tears
Finally I've made up my mind,
"To let go of my past"
Keeping all the sweet & happy memories within"
"Oh God, I really miss you lots!!"
posted by nadhee @ 04:06
4 Comments:
Hey sis its really a nice poem.
cute lovely poem Nads.. ;)
ummm well to tel u the truth the poems nice except for sum minor things dho, ey filikoalhi thakaa, banduvai akuru hama nuvumaa, aa paragraph ge error thah ok kohleema salhi vaane... y dont u try writin a bandhi or jumula. ok cheers tc ;)
fazeel: thanks ismakko! :)
forgiven: thanks dear! :)
lunar: hey this is not a lhen or raivaru!! piss piss!! anywayz thanks! i'll try to keep ur points in mind next time!
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